These are really good, and I would love to continue reading them. Especially because they stop just when things are heating up ;) Great writing, it really puts you in the place and the mood, I love it.
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OD
9/19/2011 08:51:13 am
These are really well written, and the choose-you-own thing is a great idea: it makes it that much more immediate and exciting!
Keep it up, and please drop by /r/erotica again when you've got some of the juicy stuff up!